Talk:El Negrillar
El Negrillar is currently a Geography good article nominee. Nominated by Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) at 15:06, 9 February 2024 (UTC) Anyone who has not contributed significantly to (or nominated) this article may review it according to the good article criteria to decide whether or not to list it as a good article. To start the review process, click start review and save the page. (See here for the good article instructions.) Short description: Volcanic field in the Andes |
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Possible spelling and grammar errors[edit]
Hello Jo-Jo Eumerus, I saw that the nominated this article for GA status. I'm currently experimenting with a script to automatically detect spelling and grammar errors, I hope you don't mind being my guinea pig. Feedback and improvement suggestions are welcome.
Detected possible errors:
- Sentence: The vents are spread over three sectors, and the northern in an eastern and a western sector.
- Correction: replace "northern in an eastern and a western sector" with "northern sector is divided into an eastern and a western sector"
- Explanation: clarity and grammatical structure
- Sentence: Ages of the volcanoes range from 982,000 ± 8,000 to 141,000 ± 72,000 years, and is often not reflected in the appearance of the vents.
- Correction: replace "is" with "are"
- Explanation: subject-verb agreement
- Sentence: It is possible that a change in tectonic regimen from compressive to extensive 780,000 years ago allowed the ascent of magma.
- Correction: replace "regimen" with "regime"
- Explanation: "Regimen" refers to a systematic plan or set of rules, typically for health, while "regime" refers to a system or planned way of doing things, especially one imposed from above, which is more appropriate in the context of tectonics.
Phlsph7 (talk) 15:47, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
- They seem fine for me. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:08, 15 May 2024 (UTC)