Sam Fender: Revision history


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  • curprev 18:2318:23, 16 March 2024KyleJoan talk contribs 156,765 bytes −153 copyedits; merged subsections for readability; trimmed Sound of 2018 claims for neutrality
  • curprev 04:5504:55, 16 March 2024KyleJoan talk contribs 156,918 bytes −565 removed unsourced, potentially synthesized praise; rephrased Springsteen-related material for clarity; the 'Rolling Stone' write-up was way too long; it was also discussing Fender in a context that only minimally includes him; copyedits; descriptions like "well-known", "turning point" and "stylistic lineage" are very heightened language that harms the article's neutrality

15 March 2024

  • curprev 04:4504:45, 15 March 2024KyleJoan talk contribs 157,483 bytes −141 copyedits; removed quote that does not aid the already-explanatory paraphrase; lead section changes; the first paragraph was too repetitive; why mention Fender's musical style twice essentially?
  • curprev 04:0204:02, 15 March 2024KyleJoan talk contribs 157,624 bytes −667 more copyedits; removed poorly sourced birthdate per WP:BLPPRIVACY; Ivor not suitable to be mentioned next to a Brit; replaced the former with the Mercury nom; some of these claims read unnecessarily dramatic and euphemistic; what does "abandon his qualifications" mean? trimmed quotes; the 'NYT' paraphrase of Alex Marshall's words is a major reach; Marshall does not equate Fender's lyricism to any of the acts mentioned; only that Fender's background is often depicted in their music

14 March 2024

  • curprev 17:4517:45, 14 March 2024KyleJoan talk contribs 158,291 bytes −293 continuation of previous edit; see previous summary for details
  • curprev 17:2717:27, 14 March 2024KyleJoan talk contribs 158,584 bytes −733 copyedits and fixes; simplified links per WP:NOTBROKEN; simplified lead section claims; added two Brit Awards to sum up accolades; removed random, irrelevant mentions of other artists; removed celebratory language that sources don't outright support, which harms the article's neutrality
  • curprev 16:3916:39, 14 March 2024KyleJoan talk contribs 159,317 bytes −1,197 →‎2021–present: Seventeen Going Under: removed claims that are more pertinent to the work than Fender's career; some are teetering on being undue here; one is not even sourced; trims; not sure why it matters that he performed before Billie Eilish; the source does not specify that it was a coveted spot or anything worth highlighting
  • curprev 16:0916:09, 14 March 2024KyleJoan talk contribs 160,514 bytes −164 simplified sectioning; equipment fits under artistry; health and wealth could go together under his overall personal life; neutralized claims (e.g., removed shows being sold out, celebratory language)

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  • curprev 11:0311:03, 13 March 2024KyleJoan talk contribs 160,678 bytes −5,247 major trims; removed WP:NOTNEWS-esque (e.g., the Adele shoutout, selling out shows) and/or unsourced claims; some are more relevant to the work than to Fender's career; some aren't relevant at all (e.g., Amy Winehouse being a Brit Award winner); there are irrelevant mentions of Adele that read very strange; why does it matter that Fender played a show at a venue the day after Adele did? copyedits

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